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'First time when I saw your eyes
Boy you looked right through me, hm hm
Play it cool, but I knew you knew
That cupid hit me, hm hm'

It was your first day of high school at Hetalia high.  Just moved into town, in a new house, with new friends, and pretty much, new everything.  Your dad dropped you off in front of the huge building, and you jumped out, slipping your headphones on and listening to some loud music as you walked up the stairs.  People stared, how could they not? You were a new face, a pretty one at that, but you weren’t one to be shy about stuff like that.  You let the pairs of eyes burn through you as you strode up the steps to the front entrance.
“______! Hey!" Someone called from behind you. It was your next door neighbor, Eliza.  You turned around and gave her a warm smile. You talked for a while as you walked past the soccer field to get to the the science building. Just for a second your attention turned to the group of boys on the field and to your unfortunate bad luck, you spotted one smiling Italian, causing your breathing to hitch. He was cheerfully talking to his teammates. Those honey colored eyes shone through his ruffled up light auburn hair, which shivered everytime he laughed.  You hadn't noticed that you were staring so intensely, until his eyes flickered to yours. You blushed furiously and looked away, still sensing his gaze.  Eliza noticed and giggled, and then you tripped on your own feet, and you fell, and everyone laughed.  The boys on the soccer team snickered and the Italian chuckled softly before being pulled away.

'You got me tripping, stumbling, flipping, fumbling
Clumsy cause I'm falling in love
You go me slipping, tumbling, sinking, fumbling
Clumsy cause I'm falling in love'

Time Skip (six months later: Valentines Day)...

The school day was over and you and your friends decided to do some ice skating. It was a good idea and you were all for it. For the last five months, everytime you saw Feliciano (you found out his name a few days after your humiliating trip), you'd find some clumsy way to humiliate yourself. Once, you dropped all you books and papers in the fountain. Another time, you'd accidentally spilled soup on one of your friends. And another time you fell head first into a trash can, it wasn't pretty. But you get the point.

'Can't breathe
When you touch my sleeve
Butterflies so crazy, hm hm
Whoa now, think I'm going down
Friends don't know whats with me, hm hm'

"______, I just don't understand. You're a perfectly balanced person and then suddenly BOOM!" Your friend clapped her hands together at the boom part for emphasis.  "You go flying into the pond because you tripped on someone else's shoelace." A burst of laughter came from your group, as you walked to the ice rink through the park.
“I think it’s Feli.” Eliza teased, and the rest of your friend’s made a “ooohhhhh” sound.  You rolled your eyes, but forced a smile.
"Haha, very funny. But not true." You said, when someone pushed past you. He turned around and lo and behold it was Feli. He gave you a small, kind smile.
"Scusi, bella." He said before running after his soccer friends, leaving you standing there with an obvious blush.
"Definitely Feli." One of your friends muttered and the others agreed with giggles.  You shook your head and kept walking with them.  Once you got to the ice rink, you strapped on some skates and peacefully strolled in circles around the thing. Eliza and the rest of your friends stayed behind you, wondering how you could skate with such casual ease.  Once you got the hang of it, you went a little faster, spinning in circles, making curly swirls in the ice. And then Feli walked past with his friends, his smiling face was a breathtaking as ever. Of course as you were looking, you hit the wall and flipped over to the other side, landing on your butt. People stared and gasped, and then laughed. Feli's friends were laughing as well, but he wasn't. He had a concerned expression on his face, but you didn't notice. You were sick of making a fool of yourself and tears welled up in your eyes. So you quickly put on your regular shoes and ran. You didn't know where you were going, but you couldn't stand the humiliation from a huge crowd of people.
It was dark, there was snow, and it was hard to see when you began to cross a road. The first thing you heard was repeated honking getting louder and louder. The first thing you saw was huge headlights of a truck that was coming towards you extremely fast. You froze in shock, not even able to scream, when:
"______, look out!" A familiar voice yelled.  Something or someone grabbed you and shoved you to the side and the truck past the spot where you just stood. You felt two hands come to your shoulder and make you face your savior.  More tears started to form when you saw it was Feli.
"Mio dio, are you alright, bella? You're not hurt are you?" He asked worriedly.

'You got me tripping, stumbling, flipping, fumbling
Clumsy cause I'm falling in love
You go me slipping, tumbling, sinking, fumbling
Clumsy cause I'm falling in love'

You started to cry, and you buried your face into his chest to hide your pathetic tears. You thought he was going to push you away and you were ready for that, but he didn't. Instead one arm wrapped around your waist and a hand petted your soft, damp hair.
"Bella, it's okay. You're fine now. You're alright." Feli comforted you, though his words sounded as if he was trying to reassure himself.  You tried to quiet down, his enticing scent was soothing to you.  Feli gently pulled you away and stood up, helping you to stand as well. One of his hands gently wiped off you tears stains, as you looked away from him shyly. Then a finger gingerly lifted you chin so your eyes locked. He grinned cheerfully.
"Smile for me, bella, per piacere. Your much prettier when you smile." Feli cooed, and you obeyed forcing a small smile. He chuckled.
"That's the gorgeous ______ that I know." He encouraged, causing you to laugh softly.
"I'm so sorry about having to make you do that." You gestured toward the street where you just almost got hit. Feli shook his head.
"Don't apologize, bella. It wasn't your fault." He tucked a strand of your (h/c) hair behind your ear, causing you to blush.
"Yes it was. I hate myself for being so clumsy." You said bitterly, and Feli shook his head.
"Your not clumsy. Everyone makes mistakes, bella." He said and you let out a small sigh.
"Me more than most people." You mumbled looking down again. And again his fingers tilted your chin upwards before giving you a soft, sweet kiss on the lips. You were surprised, but didn't pull away. It felt so right, so natural.  When you parted, Feli rested his forehead on yours and whispered "Ti amo, bella." You smiled slightly.

'Clumsy cause I'm falling in love
So in love with you'
Yay another songfic!!! I personally love this song because Fergie was a really good singer and its just funny.

I don't own hetalia or you or the pic

And thanks to all who comment and fave and stuff. It means a lot and I did this all on my phone so they're probably a lot if typos that I won't bother to correct.

Link to the song: [link]
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I love it but when i have a crush on a guy I'll either act sly and seductive or tsundere
seffykoepsel Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
so much fluff!
furchild1204 Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this! *fan girl squeal* 
Cyberwolf1 Sep 8, 2013  Student Artist
So cute :3
Katiefrog217 Aug 13, 2013  Student General Artist

:drool: :blush: That preview pic... HOW THE HECK DO YOU DO THAT WITH ITALY?! He's usually so cute! :drool:

erm anyway...

cute story I really loved it! :D

yay, can u do a part 2
Magmoogle Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So I'm moving to a town in which it'll snow even more than it does here, (Canada, Yay.)
And I'll be going to a new highschool.
Where ice skating is something everyone does.

I just pray something cute happens like this. :iconfrenchsquealplz:
It'd be a dream come true if I could find a guy as sweet as Italy, though~
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