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WARNING: This does have a few curse words, but not as many as my Romano X Reader, so I think it should be okay.  Enjoy the story.  Oh, I didn't write this in the title, but the story is a request from multiple people.  (The plot's mine though :D)

The sun shone brightly past the wisps of clouds that filled small parts of the light blue sky.  You inhaled the summer breeze that carried the scent of fried dough and chlorine.  So this was Six Flags.  The skyscraper tall roller coasters, and steep water slides made your stomach churn with excitement.  It was your first time here, in fact it was your first time at an amusement park in general.  Your best friends Antonio, Francis, and Gilbert had practically dragged you along with them after they heard about your park deprived childhood.  But truth be told, you were glad they took you along.
“‘Oy, ______, ‘urry up or we’ll leave without you!” Francis called a little ways ahead of you in a teasing manner.  You rolled your eyes and ran to catch up with him and the others.  They were all in swimming attire, which caused more women than usual to stare your way.  Their sunglasses sexily showed only half of their eyes, and the button down shirts they wore were completely undone, letting the sun hit of their perfectly smooth muscles.  It made you feel jealous just to look at them.  It was torment to you that they were all these flawless beings that walked with purpose, next to the plain, old, boring you, who wobbled along awkwardly in uncomfortable flip-flops.  But you knew they all loved you the way you were and that made you feel significantly blissful.  You got through the security and ticket stuff, and stared in awe at the enourmous crowd of people.  The building were colored brightly, children laughed, and music blared over everything else.
“Oh my god.” You whispered.  The Bad Touch Trio observed your expression and smirked in triumph.
“Let’s go on the roller coasters first!” Toni exclaimed.
“No, ve should go to ze game booths first!” Gil argued.
“ I zink we should go to ze water rides first!” Francis joined in.  And there they were, the Bad Touch Trio in the middle of a kid’s amusement park arguing about where they were going to play first.  A crowd of people had stopped and stared, while you stood in front, pinching the bridge of your nose in frustration.  Suddenly they all turned to you in unison and yelled:
“______!” Their tone was whiny and childlike.  They probably wanted you to defend them. You looked up and sighed impatiently.
“First off, you’re all fucking grown men, so act like it, damn it!” You hissed, and they all gave a small whimper of an apology.  You sighed and thought out a plan.
“Okay, so we should go to the water park first because they close the earliest, and then the roller coasters, and then the booths.  Sounds good?” You asked, and they nodded in approval.  You shook your head at them in shame and quickly stripped of your clothes, revealing the simple navy blue bikini that you wore underneath.
“Oh la la, _____.” Francis purred seductively, and you playfully shoved him with a giggle.  Gil unexpectedly picked you up bridal style and the trio ran with you to the water park, all four of you smiling and laughing.

Time Skip...

“Ve’re going to get you, _____!” Gil called behind you as you pushed past people in the lazy river.  You laughed and called back:
“Like hell you are!” And swam as fast as you could in the three feet of water.  Antonio accidently knocked over the picture guy, who cursed after him.  You were laughing so hard, it was hard to run.  Suddenly someone in front of you wrapped their hands around your waist and held you firmly.  You struggled a bit in Francis' grasp and then his hands went to your sides and tickled.  You squirmed and laughed, not being able to breathe.  Tears formed in the corner of your eyes as you struggled to not collapse and go under.
“F-FRANCIS!! HAHAHAHA, S-STOP ALREADY, D-D-DAMN IT!” You screamed, and he finally stopped, letting you catch your breath, but not letting you go, anticipating your escape.  Antonio and Gil finally caught up, breathless.
“Hey, you four! Get out of the water, you’re disturbing the peace!” the guard yelled from the side of the river.  You rolled your eyes and smirked and the grumpy man.
“It’s a fucking water park, loosen up!” You said cheerfully, splashing a whole lot of water on the guard, causing him to slip and fall in.  The four of you laughed and ran out before the poor man could regain his senses.

Time Skip...

“HOLY SHIT, VHAT HAVE WE DONE?!?!” Gil screamed behind you, as you fell from the sky.  It felt as though the coaster wasn’t going to stay on the tracks, as it dropped from the steepest climb physically possible.
“OH MY FUCKING GOD, VE’RE GOING TO DIE!!” He continued to scream as he and Francis clung to each other for dear life.  You and Toni laughed with both your hands in the air and your hair blowing furiously back in the wind.  Then the loops came up, and you dared yourself not to hold on to the bar.
“This is awesome!” You screamed happily.  Drowning out the girly like squeals that came from Francis.  Toni held one of your hands up with his as you soared around and around and around.  Gil yelled from the back:

Time Skip...

“Oh, _____, can ve try that one? Please, please, please?!” Gil begged, as he point to those impossible ring toss game.  You looked at the prizes and spotted a giant plushy Gilbird hanging from the ceiling.  That’s what he wanted.
“Go ‘head, your awesomeness.  Knock yourself out.” You handed him some money and he cheerfully ran over to the booth followed by the other two.  You shook your head and chuckled.  They’re such children and they'll probably never grow up, you thought, smiling
“Step right up and take your chances with the ring toss game!” The counter guy yelled in an advertising voice.  Gil handed him the money and earned three rings.  Each toss was extremely close, but always slipped in between the two bottles.
“NO, ZE AWESOME GILBERT, NEEDS ZE AWESOME GILBIRD PLUSHY!!” he whined loudly, tears threatening to form in the corners of his blood red eyes.  Francis gave it a go, but didn’t get any on the bottle, and then Antonio got one, but the counter man said you needed all three for the stuffed bird.
“Do you want to try again?” You asked Gil, but the guy said that each person could only go once.  Gil whimpered sadly and you sighed.
“Alright, alright, don’t go throwing a tantrum or anything.” You muttered and handed the counter guy some more money.  He gave you a smug look that you loathed and really just wanted to wipe clean off his face.  You stepped back a little and patiently threw the first ring. It landed square on the bottle.  You did the same thing with the next, and again, it landed on the bottle flawlessly. You took a deep breath and threw the last one. To your surprise it too, landed perfectly on the bottle. Gil cheered and practically jumped on you for a hug.  Antonio pulled him off of you while Francis casually plucked the giant plushy Gilbird from the ceiling. The counter man stared in awe, and you smirked.
"Suck it." You muttered and left with your friends, as they snickered because the plump counter guy turned purple.

Time Skip...

The sky was now black with only a few stars showing through the bright, crackling fireworks. The four of you were laying down on a spread of large beach towels, in a deserted part of the water park. You sat with the bad touch trio, sipping beers and staring up at the fireworks as you talked.
"Oh guys, it's our song!" You exclaimed happily. They quieted down and listened to the music which got louder and blared on the speakers.

Singing radiohead at the top of our lungs
With the boom box blaring as we're falling in love
Got a bottle of whatever, but it's getting us drunk
Singing here's to never growing up

The four of you sang along in your slightly drunken state.  You swayed to the rhythm, playfully nudging each other.

We'll be running down the streets yelling kiss my ass
I'm like yeah whatever, we're still living like that
When the sun's going down, we'll be raising our glass, singing here's to never growing up.

You raised your bottles and let them clink together before gulping down the last sips.  You accidentally leaned back a little too much and toppled over on Gil, who just laughed hysterically. Toni and Francis joined in and lied down as well. Now you laid on Gil's chest, while Toni laid on your stomach, and Francis laid on his. You chuckled softly and sighed.
"Have I ever told you guys that you're complete idiots?" You smirked.
"Frequently." They said in unison, earning a bark of laughter from you. They chuckled along.
"Well it's true." You said mockingly defensive and sighed once again. "My idiots." You whispered softly.  Everything was quiet after the fireworks had ended, and you hated the silence.
"Alright, well then, have I ever told you that I love you?" You asked. And you could sense their breathing hitched, there was no response.
"I'm completely serious. Have I ever told you guys that I love you? Because you three are the best and most obnoxious things that has ever entered my life. And you make me the happiest person in the world, I don't what I'd do without you." You said, matter of factly. They were silent, and you thought that you might have made things a bit awkward. So you sat up and they sat up as well. Before you could say anything they all wrapped their arms around you, engulfing you in a warm beer smelling hug.  Their noses were in your hair, taking in your sweet scent.
"Te amo."
"Je t'aime."
"Ich liebe dich." They whispered, voices cracking. You eyes welled up with tears, and you hugged them all back.
"For fuck sake, why are you all such children?" You chuckled softly and closed your eyes. You sat there like that for a while. As one last group of fireworks filled the sky.

Four hearts.
Yeah, I really didn't know how to end the story so I just made it sappy. Btw the song that was playing was called "Here's to Never Growing Up." By Avril Lavigne, and my computer isn't working at the moment so I can't put down the link (sorry)

Also I obviously don't own hetalia, or you, or the picture. (You know what, no, I DO OWN YOU) Just kidding :D

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Mishmiu Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
All i could think during the rollercoaster seen was, Oh my jesus on a bicycle thats litterally me
Pops2131 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2015
A little Gilbert x Francis action eh?
Dudethepug Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2015  Student Filmographer
So. Motherducking. Cute.
DownShiftPlus Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
AnimePanther921 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2014  Student Writer
I wish that they were real..... THEY WOULD BE MY BEST FRIENDS!!
icespark1298 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014
When I read this I thought about if the reader and a country is in another country f.eks: Reader and Romano are in America, wouldn't that sound kind of dirty? 
"Come on __y/n__, lets explore in the southerly parts here"
...yeah, I do have a dirty mind sometimes...
xXOneHellOfAGamerXx Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
xD I See What You Mean xD
TerraAreli Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
gosh do i EVER want them to be my friends XD :D
Torn-B-I-a-S Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014
I lol'd.
MarioFanfiction Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwwww this is so freaking cute!!
seffykoepsel Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
so much fucking fluff! -passes out from over load of de fluff-
Skye-42 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Student General Artist

“HOLY SHIT, VHAT HAVE WE DONE?!?!” Gil screamed behind you, as you fell from the sky.


...I see what you did there... XD

mangaanimefanforlife Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
see I didn't get that till you pointed it out thank you for that, I can be so slow sometimes *sigh*
Skye-42 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Student General Artist
Awww, it's alright. ^^ I thought it was quite funny, wether you intended it to be a reference or not. ^^
mangaanimefanforlife Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I still think it was a great reference (if it was one)
MiaRoseLove Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm exactly like Prussia when I go on rollercosters. I get to the top and all I can think is "I'm going to die!" and "I regret everything!" but by the time I get the the second hill it's more like "I regret nothing!" and "If I die, my will is in my desk." 

I loved this story so much!!!
echoknows Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
My will is written on a rock XD
TheBTTownME Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
I hate the fruking people who complain when your running around in the lazy river, or when they yell at you for getting them wet I fell yelling "for Fucks sake it's a swimming pool god damn it! Your suppose to get wet!" but i usually just give them a cheesy Alfred grin and keep running. 
callamoon14 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*sings along at the top of my lungs*
transformicerawks11 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
CookiePandax3 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hahaha, yes! A Gilbird plushie FTW! :iconyaygilbirdplz: :iconyayprussiagilbirdplz:
I love dis story :iconletmehugyouplz:
MistDream454 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013
I wanna go to 6 Flags again ;-; you made wanna go with friends \(._.)/ love this
pumpkin-milk Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
So cute!!! :iconyayfranceplz: :iconyayspainplz: :iconyayprussiagilbirdplz:
DragonSkaterofFAB Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You just became one of my favorite people... and that's a hard thing to do for me. :iconsupertighthugplz:
Amar8910 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
YAY! Thanks! Meow :3 
DragonSkaterofFAB Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome!!! :D
MotherRussiaWins Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Student Artist
tuckanimefangirl Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
I love this story, MORE!!! (Just kidding)
Konakona321 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Yay! going to Six Flags with Big Cousin España, I have no idea where this Six Flags takes place so I'm just gonna say it's Mexico!
Yami-noTenshi Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Really loved it. And that song you used, here's to never growing u, Awesome song >.<
Thanks a lot for this awesome story :)
WhiteKistuse Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013
Mizukisora1214 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah!!! Avril Lavigne all the way!!!
Tinaotaku123 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013
XD I live like 30min away from six flags so I go there all the time
sunnyh625 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lucky, I want to go sometime. I might be going this summer for the first time
Tinaotaku123 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013
XD if I ever saw u there, I would have a massive fangirling fit and would be like, "ASDFGHJKL OMIGOD OMIGOD FELLOW HETALIAN!!!!! I LOVE UR FANFICS" XD
sunnyh625 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, yeah, it'd be soo amazing to meet a fellow hetalian randomly and start ranting about hetalia, while everyone else walks past, like:
But alas, the closest six flags to me is in connecticut and zhat is not close by....
lonelylovesong Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I really want to go to six flags with my three best friends now. ;w;

Such a cute story~! <3
I-write-fanfictions Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Now I want to go to six flags with my crush and act out this shit. I love the story :iconmonkeythumbplz:
Killer-Paw Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
;w; this is so cute
Kbreezee Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Pfft every time they were called children I died laughing.
sunnyh625 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol, but doesn't that describe them perfectly?? I mean, they might be really perverted children, but still children none the less :D
Kbreezee Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hetaliafangirlneko Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Bluekyopuppy Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That is so a BTT song!! XD
AuroraTheHedgehog13 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
D'awww~!!!!! -brain explodes from overload of cuteness- Prussia: scheiBe... Guys I think ve killed her. France: oops. -picks me up- Spain: She'll be fine. :DD
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kickyou101 Featured By Owner May 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
OMG!!! I'm going there tomorrow gaaaah it would be sooo much fun to go with the btt
elenagoldenangel Featured By Owner May 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
loll cool story..let me guess french right? i'm french too but i don't have the accent lolll...
patchipatchi07 Featured By Owner May 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
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